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I wanted an apprentice :3 And I love him already <3 and his anatomy <3 HE ACTUALLY LOOKS LIKE aN APPRENTICE!! And I made him all by myself! No help! Except kel kinda had to talk me through with male eyes .__.

ANYWAY!!

Name: Shrewpaw

Role Player: *Fates-Exile

Past Names: Shrewkit | Shrewpaw | Shrewclaw

Age: 9 Moons

Gender: Tom

Clan: WillowClan

Rank: Apprentice

Appearance: Thick boned and developing muscles can already be seen under his short dark brown and caramel fur. Yellow eyes are complimented by a darker brown and his fur is marked on the paws, tail, chest, face, ears, and rump with this darker brown. Caramel marks can be seen on the hindpaws, rump, chest, and fact. White blotches on his upper lips break his sleek coat patterns looks, but some find this charming and unique.

Personality:

[ Blunt | Keeps to self | Mature | Obedient | Emotionless ]

Blunt // When Shrewpaw does speak he isn't afraid to be blunt, calling it how it is, even if it hurts the feelings of others. He tries to keep this under control though when responding to the cats of higher ranks or when Shroudedpaw is by his side.

Keeps to self // When shroudedpaw is off training with his own mentor Shrewpaw reverts back to how he was as a kit, sitting or laying off to the side, quiet and observant, and watches the clan carrying out its day. His serious face helps to preserve this personality trait, most kits or apprentices who do try to converse with him usually shy aware after he looks at them. He doesn't see the point in making many friends, for he knows one day there will be a fight, and that there will always be someone who won't make it back alive.

Mature // Far more mature then he probably should be. He is serious and level headed, always thinking things through instead of doing things rashly. He doesn't joke around much, and never plays. Being mature from a young age though he's developed a very serious face, which tends to scare off any potential friends and most kits.

Obedient // He never disobeys an order given from a higher rank and never dilly dallies. He does as he is told, when he is told, no questions asked unless prompted.

Emotionless // Even when he was a kit he never showed emotions and still doesn't unless Shroudedpaw is involved, then a small flicker of emotion lights in his eyes but that is it. It's not like he does it on purpose though and tries with gestures, like a comforting touch or rasp across the shoulder or head.


* More will be added as he grows *

Other:

:bulletblue:Shrewpaw doesn't talk unless addressed to first. Ranks play a big role in his mind and he makes sure to stay in his place.

:bulletblue:He is big boned and has the promising of a lean and strong Warrior one day.

:bulletorange: He doesn't see the point in fun or friends. ( Excluding Shroudedpaw )



Family:

- Mother - Drizzledawn(MIA)
- Father - Foxleap(MIA)
- Littermates - Quiverkit(dead)
- Other important family members - None
- Grandparents - None
- Aunts and uncles - None
- Unknown relations - None


History:

- Kithood - It was okay I guess. I don't like to look back on kithood because it was painful to me but I guess I could tell you. I was born with a sister, Quiverkit, who was weak from the start and didn't make the night for reasons I can't recall. My mom told me that Quiverkit was safe and strong now and that Starclan was looking after her for me, but that only made me feel incapable of looking after others. My father spent little time with me from the beginning, my mom always said he was just sad, and that he didn't want me to see him sad. When I was about 3 moons old my mom started to leave the nursery now and then, though it became more frequent quickly and I was left to my own thoughts, watching the warriors and apprentices carry out their days and duties to the clan. I paid no mind to the other kits, games just never interested me and they left me alone which was fine. For five moons I was left to my thoughts, my mom and dad had been gone for a moon by then and were declared dead or left the clan. It hurt. A lot. I guess I wasn't important to them but I didn't cry out, or even whimper. Instead I decided to become strong and always listen to orders. I would be the most reliable warrior ever, and I would never think of walking out on my clan like my parents did.

- Apprentice - Like the usual kit I became an apprentice at 6 moons, clan life was pretty normal for me afterwards, I was learning how to be a great warrior, hunting and patrols. I did everything I was told, I never questioned the warriors, and I could feel myself becoming stronger and stronger after every practice. But a moon after my apprenticeship Tidalwave brought back this new cat, lanky and a little small if you ask me, and the leader took him in. The new cat spent a day or two in the Medicine den, I don't really know for I really didn't pay him any mind, continuing my life like normal. I vaguely remember his apprenticeship, I was too busy thinking of all I had to do before the day was over, that was all I ever thought about. Shroudedpaw kept to himself, purposely glaring at everyone, it didn't phase me, but I left him alone. One day I came back to camp after battle training though and I saw with a glance some of the other apprentices surrounding him, I figured he had just finally made some friends until I saw one apprentice raise a paw and bring it down hard on his tail, hard enough to make him hiss. I refused to stand for it, no one should get picked on no matter the reason, especially if they are clanmates. I should have gone after a warrior, told them what was happening, got them to end the teasing, but I blinked and found myself standing in front of Shroudedpaw facing the tormentors. I told it to them straight, to leave him alone and that they had no right to torment anyone, especially a fellow apprentice. I don't know if they were shocked more out of the fact I actually spoke, or that I was protecting Shroudedpaw, whichever it was it was enough to send them away, baffled at the least. We didn't speak much after but I found him sitting nearby quietly when ever I was observing camp, waiting for orders from my mentor or other higher ranks. At 8 moons I was the head of my age group of apprentices, but it wasn't what I wanted, I still thrive and thirst for the title of the best warrior, but it was a start. My mentor and Shroudedpaws mentor decided to go on a group hunting patrol, thinking it would be great for us to work together, to SEE if we could work together. We didn't talk much on the walk there, I only spoke when the warriors wanted an answer to their questions, but I was soon told to give Shroudedpaw a chance, which I didn't mind, it wasn't like I was learning anything new, and knowledge is to be shared among everyone. We got to the practice clearing and the mentors demonstrated some hunting positions, I fell into the positions easily, executing them with precision, but Shroudedpaw seemed to be having some issues, my guess being he wasn't quite understanding it the way the warriors were wording it. I decided to help him, after getting permission, and moved slower and stopping at key points in the positions, explaining it and making sure he was understanding before moving on. He got better each time he tried on that outing and the mentors purred reassuring words to him, I kept quiet though, emotions something I never understood or displayed. I found him sticking closer on the walk back though, even talking here and there, I didn't reply though, I was going over the day in my head, determining if I could get a mouse tonight if no warrior or elder wanted one. I sat in my usually spot at the edge of the camp, Shroudedpaw sitting closer than usual munching on his own food, I could feel his glances flicker my pelt. I looked back once, that usually being enough to send any other apprentice on their way, but he merely picked up his food and scooted closer, trying to strike up a conversation the whole time. He spent days doing this, I figured he would tire out after long and look for a friend in someone else but he never did. We seemed to get paired together more and more after the hunting training and I grew accustomed to his presence, and one night I even spoke back to him, to my own surprise and his. Each day after I would try to make an effort to speak to him more and I found him by my side most the time. Apprentices still tried to pick on him though when we settled down for the night, about not having warrior blood in him, and I decided to move my bedding by Shroudedpaws, and slept next to him after that each night, I didn't mind the additional warmth, and I kind of enjoyed having him by my side even more now. We are still close even now, me being 9 moons and him 8. I still obey every word the higher ranks tell him, Shroudedpaw goes I think more for the reason that we'll get to hang out more than to listen to them. We are split up sometimes, when being trained in two different things or given different tasks, but we still eat together and shroudedpaw has grown to accept the fact I'm not much of a talker, but still goes on with how his own day went and the thoughts that were going through his own head at that moment, I listen though, and give help when he asks it.

-More will be added as he is rped-

- Warrior -
- Elder -

Relationships:

:bulletpurple: Family
:bulletyellow: Acquaintance
:bulletgreen: Friend
:bulletgreen::bulletgreen: Best friend
:bulletpink: Crush
:bulletpink::bulletpink: Love
:star: Mate
:bulletred: Dislike
:bulletblack: Enemy
:bulletwhite: Unsure
:bulletwhite::bulletwhite: Dead
~ Unknown
~~ Past Feelings

:bulletgreen::bulletgreen: Shroudedpaw - He's very lanky if you ask me, especially to others if we are walking together and it makes me feel bad. He's a great friend, always reminding me that feelings are okay to have. I really don't remember how we became so close, memories aren't my favorite thing, but he's always been there for me. I look after him to the best of my abilities, I listen to his worries and I tend to save him when others point out is thinness. He's not blood related but he's the only brother I got, and I personally wouldn't have it any other way.


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